WALT-Use Paragraphs. 22.9.17
In 1994 when you could only get very little television and it was only a black and white screen a young boy named Kento he loved to go to the Aquarium! At this time of day the sun is rising to gaver a beautiful sunny warm day!
It is the weekend now and Kento is lying in bed with his warm cover on his bed with the sun shining through edges of the blind. Just as Kento was about to wake up his mum came bursting through the door. Kento your still in bed its 9.30 we are having breakfast now if you want it! Kento got dressed and went downstairs.
When Kento was down having a warm breakfast next to the big glass doors going into the summery garden! After breakfast he asked if he could go to his friends house his name was fento. His mum said that it was fine as long as fento’s mum doesn’t mind! Ok said Kento running out the door.
That day was great said Kento oh it hasn’t finished yet we are going to the akwarium now yesss! Shouted Kento this will be great. The akwarium was amazing my favourite pat is next however all the seahorses and fish were gone!!!! This is bad then they heard a screaming they turned round and there was a blackness coming there way aaaaaaaaaaaa gggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!