WALT-use paragraphs 22.9.17
One day a girl called rose and a boy called jack both went to the zoo and they loved looking at the fishs.Suddenly,a shark came past and they both got scared.They went under the bar and that was water bso they found some snorkles and went in the water.
When they went in the water they saw lots of friendly,creatures but then they saw a big hippo (that one was not so nice.)They tryed to get out but the wall ternd into glass.They saw in his eyes that he was good.
They made freinds and played every day day and played to the other creatures.they had lots of fun.The next dayit was very sad because they had