A Peculiar Parcel

January 18th, 2018 | Posted by Megan in 100wc | Learning

Once there was a girl named Lilia who lived with her mum, dad, twin sisters Rachel and Zelda and horse Helena.  She was 16 years old and one day she received a very peculiar parcel arrived at the door.  The message scrawled across it read: ‘Lilia, I hope you will enjoy this!  From your neighbour, Sally Xxx’!  She frantically ripped open the parcel to reveal a very strange, talking hand toy.  “Hello,” Lilia said nervously.  “What’s your name?” She asked tentatively.  “McDonald’s gave me to your neighbour Sally who gave me to you,” replied the hand.  They got up to a lot of mischief  together…

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  • Mohammad (team 100) Coventry says:

    Thats a fantastic story Megan! You used really descriptive words like ‘frantically’ and ‘tentatively’ really well. I’m interested to find out what mischief Lilia and the hand got up to.



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