Adventures of jack!!!

April 30th, 2019 | Posted by Albie in Learning

                                                           Chapter  One!

                                                              The water accident!!!


One day Jack went out to sea to drive his boat around and also draw a picture of the sea for his homework. When he got there, there wasn’t any water in the sea, all the boats were floating in the air like they were god! It looked like it was just the rope and anchor holding the boat in the air, luckily his boat was by the side of the waterfront so Jack could get on the boat.


When he got on the boat he saw a note that said ‘to get the water back you have to drag the boat five hundred meters out’. Jack thought to himself, how do I do that? That is only something John Cena can do. Suddenly Jack had a brain storm, he could invent a boat-pulling piece of equipment, so he ran back to his house at top speed.

When he got home he got all his invention equipment and got to work. After ten minutes he had already made it so he ran down the road back to the waterfront. He jumped onto his boat and attached the piece of equipment (he named it Jo Jeff) onto his boat. He sat on his boat and relaxed while the Jo Jeff was pulling him and the boat along. After a while he got four hundred meters out and he started getting quicker and quicker and he made it!  He shouted “yippie!” then the water started rising!


Finally Jack could  ride his boat across the sea to have some peaceful time by himself.


Chapter Two

The Odd Island!!!


Jack sailed super far out, he didn’t remember what direction home was so he started sailing south. After a while Jack gave up going south so he went west. He saw an island in the distance and he rushed there at top speed but suddenly the fuel ran out and he started sinking! Luckily Jack knows how to make ever-lasting fuel but he didn’t have his science kit with him.  He did have two different potions, one super speed, the other walking on water and if he put them both together it will make a running on water super speed potion so he mixed them together and it worked surprisingly well! He sprinted across the water over to the island, luckily there was rope on the island so he lassood the boat and pulled the boat in (it was a bit like casting with a fishing rod). When he got the boat in he fixed the engine and made fuel out of natural things. He had to stay the night at the island but Jack wasn’t scared, he was confident that he knew what he had to do. Surprisingly Jack was quite excited for sleeping on a island but at the same time he was nervous about some dangerous animals that live on the island.

The dangerous animals that live there are scorpions, lizards, snakes, spiders, poisonous frogs and alot more!


Jack set up his things but then he had to go to the toilet which was really annoying. He  just about remembered what to do if you needed to go to the toilet. You dig a hole then make you build some walls for privacy. So Jack did all of that nonsense then he got back to the important things like catching fish, cooking the fish and staying alive in general. Jack got bored of just sitting in one place looking at the same place so he did some whittling to make things not so boring. After a while Jack had some outstandingly sharp sticks he didn’t know what to do with, so he put them to the side and watched the sun go down. Jack thought about what to do in the morning he thought of two things to do, one was go try to find home and be bored (if he did find home) and the second option was to try and go home and tell his Mum that he won’t be back until next week. Jack got to sleep after five things. Firstly, have a brainstorm about the whittled sticks and put them around him so he doesn’t get hurt in the night, secondly he got bored and drew a big picture on the sand, thirdly try to find water (because he was super thirsty), fourthly make a big fire, and finally do some sand boarding on high mountains of sand.


When he woke up the island had turned into a sugar island, the trees were candy cane and the mice were chocolate mice. The cherries were chocolate and the cacti where chocolate and everything was chocolate or sweets! Jack was surprised and sad at the same time. He was sad because his wittling was all gone and his boat was unrideable. His fuel turned into coke and the engine was chocolate! Jack got in his boat and saw a note that was in the same handwriting as the note in the boat when there was no water in the sea it said, ‘to get your normal life back at sea you have to not eat any of this candy for twenty four hours’. Jack thought that it would be easy, but he was wrong it was hard. First he saw his favourite chocolate which was hard to resist but he still did it. At mid-afternoon he got in his small tent so he couldn’t see the sweet things outside.  He tried to look on the good side of the challenge. The good things were like his teeth wouldn’t get rotten and he will be less fat than when he came. At lunchtime he ate on his fish he had the night before it was lukewarm so he didn’t die. He was tempted to have some candy but he managed to not eat any.

In the evening he watched the sun go down which was incredibly amazing. At midnight he was still up ready to go home…                                          


Made by Albie!!!

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