WALT:Use paragraphs. 22.9.17
One windy day two children(called Freya and Isabel) decided to take a trip to the zoo.”Please let us go to the zoo with our friends.”begged the children.”Alright you can go,”sighed their mum.”Thank you, thank you.” shouted the children with joy.
So of they went to the zoo with their friends Shara, Hannah, Chloe, Olivia and Emily. When they arrived there, they ran straight to the hippo enclosure.”Oh, look at those hippos,” said Isabel. Suddenly, the glass that was holding the hippos in cracked!
Quickly, they ran out of the zoo got in the car and drove away back to their houses!