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I went to the beach.
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going to the beach I bought a Strawberry ice-cream with multi-coulered sprinkels dribbling down and some Mountoun-Dew.
Going to the beautiful beech, I went in the cold and wet sea however my annoying dad wouldn’t come in with me.
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