In the Town

November 10th, 2017 | Posted by Daisy in 100wc

One day in a night there was a girl she was called Isabella.Her mother had a job at a school techer so Isabella had to walk to school with her Nan.Suddenly, there was a fair on at 7am there was ghosts and Isabella liked ghosts.Her Mum had to go to work but this time I walked to school and after she colled see the fair.

She got to have a hot dog but at the fair there was something going on. Her Nan was gone so she exsplord the place. She gone home Mum Mum were are you come home…

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  • Ms McKenzie says:

    Hi Daisy
    Thank you for sharing your writing with us. It sounds as if you have been to a fair before. I was at one this weekend and people were all having hot dogs (as well as candy floss and ice creams). There were lots of people at the fair too so it would be very easy for a child to get lost. Is that what happened with Isabella or did the ghosts have something to do with her being lost?
    Keep up the great work.
    Ms McKenzie (Team 100 WC Christchurch, New Zealand)



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