September 22nd, 2017 | Posted by Lennie in Learning - (0 Comments)

 

One day there was two boy and their name wa james and luke they was playing hide and seek luke was hiding james was Counting luke went into his closet  then luke said james come look  in my room james then came luke said let’s go into it so they went into it and they fail down the room and frond ay hipow tried to hart them

 

September 22nd, 2017 | Posted by Charlie in Learning - (0 Comments)

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In 1994 when you could only get very little television and it was only a black and white screen a young boy named Kento he loved to go to the Aquarium! At this time of day the sun is rising to gaver a beautiful sunny warm day!

 

It is the weekend now and Kento is lying in bed with his warm cover on his bed with the sun shining through edges of the blind. Just as Kento was about to wake up his mum came bursting through the door. Kento your still in bed its 9.30 we are having breakfast now if you want it! Kento got dressed and went downstairs.

 

When Kento was down having a warm breakfast next to the big glass doors going into the summery garden! After breakfast he asked if he could go to his friends house his name was fento. His mum said that it was fine as long as fento’s mum doesn’t mind! Ok said Kento running out the door.

 

That day was great said Kento oh it hasn’t finished yet we are going to the akwarium now yesss! Shouted Kento this will be great. The akwarium was amazing my favourite pat is next however all the seahorses and fish were gone!!!! This is bad then they heard a screaming they turned round and there was a blackness coming there way aaaaaaaaaaaa gggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

September 22nd, 2017 | Posted by Emily in Learning - (0 Comments)

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One day a girl called rose and a boy called jack both went to the zoo and they loved looking at the fishs.Suddenly,a shark came past and they both got scared.They went under the bar and that was water bso they found some snorkles and went in the water.

 

When they went in the water they saw lots of friendly,creatures but then they saw a big hippo (that one was not so nice.)They tryed to get out but the wall ternd into glass.They saw in his eyes that he was good.

 

They made freinds and played every day day and played to the other creatures.they had lots of fun.The next dayit was very sad because they had

September 22nd, 2017 | Posted by Theo in Learning - (1 Comments)

 the hippo side go then ok then smash the glass prok then the hippobrok free and trnt in to a boy a gen.Walt use pargahs                      The killer hippo                                       22.9.17

 

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One day there was a boy and a grle they work beging to go to the myooseum finle mum sedie yes finly they got in the car to go to the myoosem they work there so they lookd at the fish then they                                                                                                                           

 

Wnent to the uther sid they work at the last bit and they work they found a hippo in the watrar so one thought in there hede what if the  it suckd them  in to the watr then he side it  awout  loud then the hippo was speking to them they for got that they cood spekin hippo so they spok to the hippo and the hippo side let me aout of hiare pless then they side ok in hippo then

September 22nd, 2017 | Posted by Joshua in Learning - (0 Comments)

A hipoe was born in year 1985.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    The mum left a week later.                                                                                                                                                                                                                 

  He struggled to walk for a year and a month

September 22nd, 2017 | Posted by Ruby in Learning - (0 Comments)

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One day there was two girls called Ruby and Lucy they went to the Zoo to see the hippo . The girls got lost the went into weird animals there was a hippo they touched the water wall and fell in .

 

‘’Help me ‘’ said the hippo  ‘’we will ‘’ while we wait lets swim’’…   

September 22nd, 2017 | Posted by Angus in Learning - (0 Comments)

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There is a massive fish tank that has salty water in it.

They are standing next to a hippo that wants to be frends  with  them.

The hippo is realy upset because he has no frends.

The hippo isnt realy a hippo it is realy a scuba diver.

The scuba diver is cleaning the tank out.

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