One day , i the citys of London a man was walking down the street and he was walking down the road and he was holding a big sack of bricks that he was taking to fix a hole in Buckingham palace but suddenly , a massive gorilla stole the bag and made a runner for it he was running so fast until he found this pretty mansion that no one lives in .
He slept in it until he realised that the hole was still in the Queens house (well, mansion) . He found a yellow phone box and told the Queen he would be there soon
By Wesley
To be continued .
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Hi Wesley
I loved the idea of the man carrying the bricks to fix a hole in Buckingham Palace, he must have been a very strong man (an an equally strong gorilla!!)
I also think that you ended the story well, with the man calling the queen. I wonder if she believed his story!
Miss T team 100wc
Thank u Mrs T , I really appriciate it !