The New House

November 6th, 2018 | Posted by Ella in 100wc

Once there was a girl called Eliza. She was nine year’s old and lived with her mum, her dad and her little brother Josh. One night Eliza’s mum and dad came upstairs and told them … THEY WERE MOVING HOUSE!!!!!!! She was very shocked and Josh was so shocked he fainted. They said ”We’er looking at the house tomorro”! She couldn’t beleve her ear’s.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     The next day mum woke everybody up really early. They all got in the car and sped off. When they pulled into the drive it looked horrible at first sight. They got out of the car. Even mum and dad were scared to open the door! ”Go on and open the door” said mum. She wondered what was on the other side.                                                                                                                                                                                                Eliza opend the door and it was beautiful inside. They bought it and lived hapilly ever after.

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  • Dad says:

    I like the way you set the family scene; i felt that I was actually with the Eliza as she opened the door. I bet it smelt of roses just like our house did the first time we opened the front door!! 🙂



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