Jake: I wanted to go to the park (shouted)
Mum: You can’t because I work and your not aloud to go
Mum: because your to young (shouted)
( That night Jake stepped three steps to go to the park then something caught his eye)
( He went Five steps closer and then he saw a little door and went though the door)
( He got shut in and then he saw a sine that Said Go away or pay the price)
( After ten seconds he ran back home and never ever wanted to go to the park)
to be continued …..