the sercret

November 21st, 2017 | Posted by Zak in 100wc

One day there round a was a ghost was fling around a tree.Some one was walking towards him,fastly he hide around the over side of the tree and he went into a tree.The lady walked right past it“ya she didn`t see me he shouted.Then he was to loud and the lady might of head him.It was to late he had been found,it was like a game of hide and seek.He ran for his life round the park but he found some poilce around some wild flowers  the trouble was that he ran on the flowers and he had a fight.

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  • Jane Tucker says:

    Hi Zak,
    Thank you for sharing your writing with us this week. Did you enjoy the prompt? I know a lot of our children had some excellent ideas.
    Do you think ending your story with a cliffhanger would work?
    Well done and keep sharing! 🙂
    Mrs Tucker (100WC Team)
    Wirral, UK.



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