September 16th, 2017 | Posted by Ana in Learning

One day a little group of dwarfs were sailing across the seas. It was a nice sunny day so they decided to go for a quick swim. Just at that moment a big crowd of sharks came gathering round them. “AAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!” the dwarfs screamed. They all crowded into the boat. Quickly, they paddled away from the sharks! Suddenly, a waterfall came into sight. They tried to get away from the waterfall but the current was too strong! It flushed them down it. Luckily, they all managed to stay on the boat. Just in there sight they saw a dragons home. They decided to camp out there that night. Did it end as well as they thought it would?

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  • Mr Bennett says:

    Ana – I like your use of a question at the end of your story. Well done for using some great openers here. To make it even better you could try to use connectives to extend some of your sentences. Well done!

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